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Liz M


Free Account, Sydney

Old Man

This is of an old man waiting for a train at Sydney's Town Hall station.

Commentaire 2

  • Steve A 16/05/2005 10:02

    I completely disagree with the previous poster.
    the foot in the right hand corner MAKES the picture!!!
    putting him in the centre exagerates his loneliness.
    putting him to the side makes it seem as if he is looking at something. he isn't. he's deep in thought.

    I did this deep in thought thing for my film. I have imaginary fantasy arguments with HSC markers telling them why the person doesn't have 'looking room'



    GREAT work Liz,
    Steve (LASAR LEADER)
    All hail steve
  • Richard Overtoom 15/03/2005 0:01

    g-day liz,
    the idea of this picture is really good. i like the grain and the movement and also the old man's pose.
    however, i would'nt put your subject in the middle like this, but rather cut the space behind his briefcase and leave more space to his left. then you got a far more pleasing result and also get rid of that bastard's leg on the right :-))
    greetings to oz
    richard